Outline of Reader Response

Thesis statement :
     Writing and editing one's stories may not be sufficient in improving physical health and leading them to the happiness.

First supporting idea:
     Writing may make people calm down and recognize the real problems. However, writing cannot help people to find the solutions to the problems they are facing. Thus, they cannot achieve happiness as the problems are still there.

Second supporting idea:
    Physical health cannot be improved simply through writing.
    For some patients, who need real physical exercise, writing is not helpful.

Third supporting idea:
    People may wallow in the fake story that he is writing on and lose himself in the unreal happiness.

To be continued...